red-lasbelin.livejournal.com ([identity profile] red-lasbelin.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] red_lasbelin 2014-08-27 08:33 pm (UTC)

I looked at Thread, and I'm not sure my style has changed all that much. So I'm not sure what to do with it, other than point out I now try to make sure that I stay in one person's POV instead of switching between the two POVs, and there are some word choices and phrases I use less generously now.

I dunno, I don't really consider myself a stylish writer in general. Functional, I guess.
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