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Red ([personal profile] red_lasbelin) wrote2014-08-23 01:24 pm
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I'm a lemming part deux

I resisted as long as I could, but then I jumped off the cliff after everyone else. Be gentle!

Pick a couple and I will answer:

A. Describe your comfort zone—a typical you-fic.
B. Is there a type of story you’ve yet to try your hand at, but really want to?
C. Is there a type of story you wouldn’t touch with a ten foot pole?
D. How many fic ideas are you nurturing right now? Care to share one of them?
E. Share one of your strengths.
F. Share one of your weaknesses.
G. Share a snippet from one of your favorite pieces of prose you’ve written and explain why you’re proud of it.
H. Share a snippet from one of your favorite dialogue scenes you’ve written and explain why you’re proud of it.
I. Which fic has been the hardest to write?
J. Which fic has been the easiest to write?

K. Is writing your passion or just a fun hobby?
L. Is there an episode section of canon above all others that inspires you just a little bit more?
M. If you could choose one of your fics to be filmed, which would you choose?
O. If you only could write one pairing for the rest of your life, which pairing would it be?
P. Do you write your story from start to finish, or do you write the scenes out of order?
Q. Do you use any tools, like worksheets or outlines?
R. Stephen King once said that his muse is a man who lives in the basement. Do you have a muse?
S. Describe your perfect writing conditions.
T. How many times do you usually revise your story/chapter before posting?
U. Choose a passage from one of your earlier stories and edit it into your current writing style. (Person sending the ask should make suggestions).
V. If you were to revise one of your older stories from start to finish, which would it be and why?
W. Have you ever deleted one of your published stories?
X. What do you look for in a beta?
Y. Do you beta yourself? If so, what kind of beta are you?
Z. How do you feel about collaborations?
AA. Share three of your favorite fic writers and why you like them so much.
AB. Do you accept prompts?
AC. Do you take liberties with canon or are you very strict about your fic being canon compliant?
AD. How do you feel about smut?
AE. How do you feel about crack?
AF. What are your thoughts on non-con and dub-con?
AG. Would you ever kill off a canon character?
AH. Which is your favorite site to post fic?
AI. Talk about your current wips.
AJ. Talk about a review that made your day.
AK. Do you ever get rude reviews and how do you deal with them?
AL. Write an alternative ending to a fic you've written (specify by title, link or general description].
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[identity profile] larienelengasse.livejournal.com 2014-08-23 09:00 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm going with:

G. Share a snippet from one of your favorite pieces of prose you’ve written and explain why you’re proud of it.

U. Choose a passage from one of your earlier stories and edit it into your current writing style. (Person sending the ask should make suggestions).

[identity profile] red-lasbelin.livejournal.com 2014-08-24 10:02 pm (UTC)(link)
G. Share a snippet from one of your favorite pieces of prose you’ve written and explain why you’re proud of it.

They rediscovered each other that night, with mouth and hands, pausing briefly at Troy’s scar. He could tell the absence of the tattoo hurt Fin, but he didn’t ask, didn’t talk about it, only pressed deeper into Troy and made him cry out from the sharp-edged pleasure. Fin had more tattoos since they had been together, but there wasn’t time and space to really look. Their joining was not slow and sweet, but with a hunger that was born of complications, heart pain and absence.
There was a little time, before slumber, where they lay sated and tucked together, Troy running fingers over inked skin. Fin still had the matching tattoo on his left arm, Glorfindel, in that script from their dreams.

“Turn over, I want to see.” He pushed at Fin’s shoulder and received grumbling softened by sleepiness in reply, but he got what he wanted. He swept away blond hair, tucking it over Fin’s shoulder to get the full picture and his hands faltered as that picture came into view. A phoenix with wings that spanned his shoulders blades and down to mid-back, rising from fire and ash, and a long, black cord, and… Troy followed the length of the cord, neatly woven into the design, to the monster that held the end of the whip, a horned beast, something straight out of the pit of Hell.

“No, Fin. Not that. Why did you get that?” He was caught off guard at the depth of emotion in him, beyond him, to the part of him he used to call another person.

Fin was quiet for a few minutes, and Troy would have thought he was asleep, but Ery knew he wasn’t. “Was a while after you left. I kept seeing him, even when I wasn’t high, followed me into my dreams. Thought maybe it would help to put him behind me.”

Troy remembered the times they had come out of their high and Fin was curled up on the bed, talking about fire, burning and no air and darkness. He remembered the sketches, hastily done, but vivid in their starkness. He was struck then as now by the sense of déjà vu, the sense that in another time, another place they’d been there before, Ery comforting Fin.

He couldn’t breathe suddenly, the air was just out of reach. He hadn’t had anything remotely like a panic attack for a while, but he felt the beginnings of one. Fin rolled over, and the image was gone, and in its place was Fin reaching for him, pressing kisses against his forehead, cheeks and mouth. “It’s okay, Ery. It’s all right. I’m here, and you are too. Everything is fine.”


Pulled from Ghosts, it's the last thing I've written so far, and one of my strongest stories in general, I think. This particular passage is my favorite because it tells a lot about Erestor and Glorfindel's relationship contrasted with their present reality, plus Erestor's panic attack, and Glorfindel's method of embracing one of his darkest memories/nightmares. And I'm proud of the tattoo idea.

U. Choose a passage from one of your earlier stories and edit it into your current writing style. (Person sending the ask should make suggestions).

I can take a crack at it, but I need a suggestion first?
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[identity profile] larienelengasse.livejournal.com 2014-08-24 10:40 pm (UTC)(link)
DOH! I didn't finish, did I?

How about something from Insanity Lurks?

[identity profile] red-lasbelin.livejournal.com 2014-08-25 12:31 am (UTC)(link)
Need something more specific? Insanity Lurks is my lj, which has almost all my fiction...
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[identity profile] larienelengasse.livejournal.com 2014-08-25 02:29 am (UTC)(link)
Well, I'm just batting a thousand on the bonehead front today. I'd like something from There Moves a Thread That Has No End.

[identity profile] red-lasbelin.livejournal.com 2014-08-27 08:33 pm (UTC)(link)
I looked at Thread, and I'm not sure my style has changed all that much. So I'm not sure what to do with it, other than point out I now try to make sure that I stay in one person's POV instead of switching between the two POVs, and there are some word choices and phrases I use less generously now.

I dunno, I don't really consider myself a stylish writer in general. Functional, I guess.
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[identity profile] larienelengasse.livejournal.com 2014-08-24 10:41 pm (UTC)(link)
I love Ghosts. Such a poignant story.

[identity profile] red-lasbelin.livejournal.com 2014-08-25 12:31 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you very much, Larien. *hugs*